Every great screenplay begins with a strong foundation — compelling characters, sharp dialogue, purposeful pacing, and a structure that carries the audience from the first page to the final fade‑out. As an award‑winning author with years of storytelling experience, I offer detailed, practical critiques designed to help screenwriters elevate their scripts and bring out their full potential.
Whether you’re polishing a draft before submitting to competitions, preparing for a producer pitch, or simply wanting a fresh, professional perspective, my critique service gives you clear, actionable insights you can use immediately.
Script Critique Service
Each critique focuses on the core elements that determine whether a script truly works on the page and on the screen:
• Pacing
How well the story moves, where momentum builds, and where tightening could strengthen the narrative.
• Dialogue
Whether it feels natural, character‑specific, and emotionally resonant.
• Character Development
Clarity of motivations, arcs, relationships, and emotional beats.
• Act Breaks
Strength and clarity of turning points, transitions, and structural rhythm.
• Plot Structure
Cohesion, stakes, conflict, escalation, and payoff.
What You Will Receive
Pricing Tiers
Free First-Act Appraisal
Before committing, you can send me the first act of your script for a free sample critique. This gives you a clear sense of my style, depth of analysis, and how I approach your story.
No obligation. No pressure. Just honest, professional feedback.
Why Work With Me?
- Award‑winning Irish author with experience in fantasy, horror, and character‑driven storytelling
- A deep understanding of narrative structure and emotional pacing
- Clear, constructive feedback that respects your creative vision
- A genuine passion for helping writers bring their stories to life
My goal is simple: to help you make your script the strongest version of itself.
How To Submit Your Script
Before you send your script to not only me but any critiquing service, always make sure you register it with the WGA and copyright the script either through the US Copyright Office or the copyright office in your own country. Always protect your script and you can do so by registering it.
When the above has been done, simply visit the Contact Page and send me a message with:
- Your name
- Script title
- Page count
- Which tier you’d like (For New Screenwriters or For Seasoned Screenwriters)
- Whether you’d like the free first‑act appraisal
I’ll reply with next steps and turnaround details.
Let’s Strengthen Your Story Together
Every script has potential — sometimes it just needs the right set of eyes. I’d be honoured to help you shape your story into something powerful, polished, and ready for the next stage of its journey.
Frequently Asked Questions
- How long does it take to receive my critique?
- Turnaround time is typically 14 days for Standard Critiques and 18 days for Premium Deep Dive Critiques. If you need a faster turnaround, feel free to ask — I’ll let you know if I can accommodate it.
- What Formats Do You Accept?
- I accept scripts in PDF format, which ensures consistent formatting and page count. If your script is in Final Draft, Celtx, or another writing program, simply export it as a PDF before sending.
- Is My Script Kept Confidential?
- Absolutely. Your work remains 100% private and confidential. I never share, store, or distribute scripts beyond the time needed to complete your critique.
- Do You Offer Script Rewrite Services?
- At the moment, I provide rewrite suggestions as part of the Premium Deep Dive Critique, but I do not offer full script rewrites. My goal is to empower you to strengthen your own work with clear, actionable guidance
- What's Included in the Free First Act Appraisal?
- You’ll receive a sample critique covering pacing, dialogue, character setup, and structural clarity for your first act. This gives you a feel for my style and the depth of feedback you can expect before committing to a full critique.
- Do You Critique All Genres?
- Yes — while my background is in fantasy and horror, I’m comfortable critiquing scripts across all genres, including drama, comedy, thriller, sci fi, and family films. Strong storytelling principles apply universally.
- Can I Ask Follow-up Questions After Receiving My Critique?
- Of course. If anything in your critique needs clarification, you’re welcome to email me with follow up questions. I want you to feel confident moving forward with your revisions.
- Do You Critique TV Pilot Scripts?
- Yes — TV pilots can be critiqued under the same pricing structure, depending on page count. Just mention that it’s a pilot when you contact me.
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